Monday, November 20, 2017

Comments for Aaron and Brooke

1-- Write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?

2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group.  What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.

The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.

Pablo Picasso.

Comments for Lexia and Valerie

1-- Write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?

2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group.  What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.

The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.

Shonda Rhimes.

Comments for Chuck and Nuh

1-- Write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?

2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group.  What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.

The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.

Steve Wozniak.

Comments for Mohammed and Sam

1-- Write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?

2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group.  What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.

The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.

Wednesday, November 15, 2017

Jeremy Johnson Journal 8

Part 1: After concluding the reading of our book, "In the Presence of Fear", I found the whole book worth reading.  I love how structured the first essay is and how it makes you sit back and think about each issue mentioned.  I am a business major, so the way he represents issues in our economy is wonderful.  If I had to chose my best from the book; I would chose the third essay.  I too am against some issues that need movements in the economy.  We came here to America to get away from taxation and religious beliefs being conducted unfair. Yet, we are heading right back into a more communist government in my opinion.  We are all slaves of something.  Whether it be debt or the pollution going into our bodies from processed foods.  The beautiful land we came here to build a nation on has been traumatized by the ignorance of the people industrializing it, and I believe Wendell's view on this matter.  To make a more perfect economy, we need to back away, just a bit, from technology.  Wendell says, "Too much money, moreover, attracts administrators and experts as sugar attracts ants--look at what is happening in our universities." (43)  And I stand firm on the notion he represents here.  Many citizens in newer generations, and some old, have industrialized so much in life, that they are becoming dependent on technology.  Cell phones make us forget our loved ones phone numbers.  Typing this blog on a laptop makes one forget how to spell, for the use of laptops does spell check and you lose memory on easy words.  Just as we have lost the Native American way of agriculture that made the land more resourceful.  To go into having local economies, as mentioned in the third essay, would help us reduce the government involvement long enough to show that government itself is the issue for our economy.  We would see economic growth when we stat local in our country, states, cities, etc....
Part 2:  While going through my active listening notes of the "Fresh" video we watched, I found an interest in looking up more on how agricultural waste can help ecosystems regrowth overtime.  I already heard of the situation in Costa Rica, where an entire forest was burnt down.  An orange juice producer found this as an easy disposal of its peels and pulp not used in juicing.  Twenty years later, many noticed that the damage was reversed and the ecosystem was restored even stronger than before.  It took time, but even the animals were in full prosperity on the land.  I found it funny that, the use of agricultural waste for helping ecosystems regrowth was found on accident.  Dumping on a disaster zone was in actuality, the best finding for our mother Earth.  We just need more participation in the matter.
Figure 1: Amazing what our waste can do for our land. Public Domain.
A link to my research that I found interesting

Comments for Zach and Cameron

1-- Write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?

2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group.  What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.

The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes

Elon Musk

Comments for Lexi and Jake

1-- Write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?

2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group.  What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.

The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes

Seth McFarlane

Comments for Tyler and Heather

1-- Write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?

2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group.  What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.

The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.

Mark Cuban.

Comments for Brent and Theo

1-- Write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?

2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group.  What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.

The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.

Tuesday, November 14, 2017

Journal 8----Jake RItzert

Part One:
I think the first essay made me think the most because I was still trying to adjust to the style of writing Wendell was presenting for the audience. I found the fact that he laid out the complex information in steps or outline format to help the reader try to better understand the information being presented.  I think that the first essay captures the impacts of 9/11 and how our culture and economy shifted from the moment the tragic event took place. We became more reliant on technology and military innovation because we believed that retaliation and protection of the citizens was necessary for America to survive. Berry goes on to point out the flaws of our total economy and how consumption and wanting ultimately drives our nation. He believes that change is necessary because it is common sense and morally correct to not kill the Earth and the life that has thrived for a long time. "Our economy needs to know--and care--what it is doing. This is revolutionary, of course, if you have a taste for revolution, but it is also a matter of common sense." He calls on people to stand up and overpower the current economic system in place because it is obviously corrupted and needs to be corrected if humanity is going to survive in future generations.

Part Two:
My research topic was the effects cow dairies has on pollution in our current economy.

"According to the EPA, a 2,000-cow dairy generates more than 240,000 pounds of manure daily or nearly 90 million pounds a year. The USDA estimates that the manure from 200 milking cows produces as much nitrogen as sewage from a community of 5,000 to 10,000 people. "

 "According to the EPA, excess nutrients from agriculture, including chemical fertilizers and dairy manure, are a major source of water pollution across the US. "

I decided to choose this research topic because I found it to be one of the most interesting and overlooked ways that humans are able to pollute our wonderful world. Most people think of pollution by throwing trash outside, burning oil, or over using plastics/styrofoam, etc. but most people do not know the impacts that the dairy industry has from the close proximity and staggering numbers of cows on farms that lead to increased Nitrogen levels. I learned the cow manure directly impacts the area or farmland it is on by creating dead zones, too low of oxygen levels to survive on, and effects other places from manure runoff into water supplies and manure spills. 
This image shows the news report of 100,000 gallons of manure leaking from a Wisconsin farm. 100,000 gallons! Let that soak in for a minute....that's a lot of manure.

Monday, November 13, 2017

Journal 8 Nuh Issack

Part I
My favorite essay is the first one " in the presence of fear" by Wendell Berry. The part of this essay that moved me was that which talks about the 9/11 terrorist attack which still remains in the memory of many Americans. These terror attack has created hatred between Muslims and others. The fact is that the terror attack was not done in accordance with Islamic teaching and those who did it should not be affiliated with Islam. Both Muslims and non Muslims coexisted peacefully on this planet thousand years ago but what is happening today in the name of a religion is a strange thing. The hatred that is seen in all over the world today is because of the actions of very few individuals with the name of Muslims. we have more than one billion Muslims today in this world so if all of them become terrorists, how will the world look like?. will be saver than it is today?. what we should know is that all Muslims are not terrorists just like all Christians are not terrorists. The only way that the hatred can be eliminated is to teach ourselves and people the importance of coexisting regardless of our faiths." we have ignored the teachings and the examples of Christ"


Part II

By watching the fresh, I have seen interesting things in agriculture. The farmers, in order to increase their productivity and supply have preferred the use of antibiotics to feed their animals. But unfortunately there is antibiotics resistance which means that the use of antibiotics may not work and since we are feeding animals products which is fed only with antibiotics, we are likely to fall sick. its better if an alternative solution is gotten for this problem. we better consume little healthy food instead of eating unhealthy foods 24/7. we are more susceptible to diseases now then before. we have to watch out!.



a farmer feeds his animals with antibiotics



Frederick Law Olmstead Comments


u1-- Write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?

2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group.  What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.

The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.
 
Mohammed and Justine did Frederick Law Olmstead.
 

Misty Copeland Presentation Comments


u1-- Write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?

2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group.  What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.

The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.
 
Annie and JoAnn did Misty Copeland.
 

Malcolm X Presentation Comments


u 1-- Write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?

2-- Offer constructive criticism that would help this group.  What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Where did you want more clarity or development? What did this group miss? Etc.

The best and most thoughtful comments will likely include information, observations, quotes, statistics, connections, questions. . . or other material from your active listening notes.
 
Aziz, Jeremy, and Jonikka did Malcolm X.

Journal 8 Mohamed Jama


Part I

I was touched by the essay "The Idea of Local Economy" in the Presence of Fear. I like the paragraph where the author mentions how "most of the people in the developed world have given proxies to the corporations to produce and provide all their food, clothing and shelter"(p13). I believe the main take away is the problem that people in the western world have given the opportunity to corporations or a few of rich individuals to monopolize everything from food, clothing to services such education, health and insurance businesses. I don’t  know how a handful of corporations are able to process the whole countries food? It is mystery to me. However, I believe the problem is the industrialization of everything plus the government regulations that are always in favor for the rich.

Part II


In the Fresh documentary, I did research more about the term "sharecropping". Sharecropping is a system where the landlord/planter allows a tenant to use the land in exchange for a share of the crop. Sharecropping used to be a well-known method of farming which was popular in America during the slavery time.


Sharecropping Cycle


Work Sited:
http://www.pbs.org/tpt/slavery-by-another-name/themes/sharecropping/
http://ushistoryvocab.weebly.com/sharecropping.html